One thing I hate about genderfuck is when they switch pronouns as suddenly as they switch the gender. And then they cry for no apparent reason, coo over puppies, say "but don't you love me anymore" and suddenly have 30 someodd years of being socialized as a woman tacked on when they loose their penis.

So I rather liked that Rodney was still Rodney, just, you know... with breasts and girl parts. I also liked that you still called him him.

But one thing, in this little snippet you suddenly changed his pronouns to her. It was only for a paragraph but it was a little jarring. I don't know if you care, but since I was reading this and thought of it at the time, I thought I should tell you.

It's still the hotness though.