You made me cry. The song creeps up on you - it seems deceptively quiet/personal - but by counter-pointing the images (particularly at the end "And I'm so happy/I had to tell you/
And I love you") with sadder images against the lyrics made the struggles the Atlantis team are facing universal and turn the last lines ("You will not write me again") even more poignant. I also loved how you handled the tonal shift in the song - going from small/intimate/personal to an expanding scarier yet exciting/larger universe.

But more importantly - you made me cry.