Now unaccountably late. But then, I think I needed the extra day to figure shit out. I now know exactly what I'm doing for everything.
Things already done -- fiddled with pacing. I think it is now up to your standards
gwyn_r. Or as close as I can get it, in any case.
Replaced the anvil at the beginning with something less literal. Thanks
boniblithe! It actually gave me an opportunity to clips I thought I wasn't going to get the chance to use.
Figured out everything that wasn't working narrative-wise, figuring out what to replace the clips with, and deleting the original, non-working clips.
Things I still have to do -- do the actual replacing. I also want to try a few different possibilities for the ending.
I figure I'll try to get this up Monday morning. That'll give me a little more time to stare at it and maybe have
permetaform look at it once more.
Things already done -- fiddled with pacing. I think it is now up to your standards
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Replaced the anvil at the beginning with something less literal. Thanks
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Figured out everything that wasn't working narrative-wise, figuring out what to replace the clips with, and deleting the original, non-working clips.
Things I still have to do -- do the actual replacing. I also want to try a few different possibilities for the ending.
I figure I'll try to get this up Monday morning. That'll give me a little more time to stare at it and maybe have
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