lierdumoa | Oct. 28th, 2005

I'm trying to gauge properly Rodney' level of freakout and how many alterations I need to make to a certain scene in my fic. On the one hand, I think I need to emphasize him missing his penis anymore. On the other, well, he'd pretty much be looking at his new female body as, like, "This is not my body, this is just a temporary mishap now shut up and get back to work" and in light of his not looking at his body as his own he'd be looking at it fairly objectively, and in light of him being a hopeless nerd with no people skills who is shocked and amazed when women come on to him, his standards would not be that high. He'd think his big tits were fucking cool, and the only way they could be cooler is if the came with a wall mirror.

But he would miss his penis. A lot. Especially when he tried getting off the girl way and realized he couldn't make himself come in two minutes.

Somewhere in this I have to bring up his control issues. And decide whether getting turned into a woman is more than, less than, or equally traumatizing as getting a woman stuck in your brain with you and/or being wrong about something. For Rodney, anyway.

Whatevs. If the characterization is terrible I will just tell people I am channelling Rodney Anne Rice style, and stop interpreting my fic wrong.

::taps fingers::

Still waiting for my last beta to get back to me.

::strongly considers taking up nail biting::

Maybe I should just write that missing scene in Ch. 2 and get it over with. After all, Ch. 2 has the sex in it, and that's what you all came here for, right? Hopefully? Seeing as it was my entire reason for writing this? Well, that and the sex that will be in Ch. 3 and Ch. 4 and Ch. 5 and possibly Ch. 6 depending on how long this thing goes on.