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It occurs to me that the sex at the end is a lot more gratuitous than I originally thought it would be. I may or may not cut it out, depending on what my betas think. I'll probably reword it a bunch as well. Cause I'm a perfectionist like that.
Bah.
No more thinking today.
My brain is so, so dead.
It occurs to me that the sex at the end is a lot more gratuitous than I originally thought it would be. I may or may not cut it out, depending on what my betas think. I'll probably reword it a bunch as well. Cause I'm a perfectionist like that.
Bah.
No more thinking today.
My brain is so, so dead.
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