pr0n!

Apr. 27th, 2004 11:10 pm
lierdumoa: (spine arch)
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Title: too lazy to come up with one
Fandom: QaF RPS
Pairing: Gale/Randy
Rating: NC-17
Summary: shower!sex, as my dear Syd requested
Warning: unbeta'd

A/N: Bitch, you so owe me for this. I don't write pr0n spur of the moment for just anybody, you know.

Notes to Self: community feedback




Randy liked showering during the day. At night the only light was the yellowish ceiling lamp in the bathroom, and his skin was pale enough to reflect the color unflatteringly. So he tried to convince Gale that showering during the day was a good thing.

The argument usually went something like this -- Gale would complain that he preferred night time showers, Randy would complain about the lighting, Gale would say something to the effect of, "Who gives a fuck what you look like in the shower? I don't. And I'm the only one who sees you," and Randy would bribe him with the offer of good head.

"Seriously?

"Yeah."

"Promise?"

"I promise!" Good thing Gale didn't realize that the whole point of Randy inviting him into his shower was to give head.

"And I don't have to give you head, right?"

"Hey, I didn't even ask. Remember what happens when you try to give me head in the shower? You always end up slipping on the tile. Last time you nearly broke your nose."

"Hey, it was slippery. You're the one who dropped the soap."

"See! It wasn't even a head giving situation. I wanted you to fuck me. Hence the soap dropping. But instead you tried to give me head, and I ended up nursing your bleeding face for the next two hours."

"You exaggerate."

"Gale!"

"Fine. I'll shower with you."

Mere seconds later, Gale found himself with the shower tap digging into his back, his fingers gripping the shower curtain, and his knees going liquid. Randy swallowed him to the hilt almost immediately. He knew exactly what he was doing. He was damn good at it too, he thought smugly, clamping his lips around the base of Gale's erection while sliding one soap covered finger over the brunet's perineum and back, back, back towards that clenching and unclenching ring of muscle behind it.

"Fuck," Gale moaned, sliding his fingers over Randy's recently shaven head, suddenly wishing there were more to hold on to as the warm skin moved under his hands to the back and forth motions of the blond's mouth. "Fuck, fuck, fuck...Randy!"

Randy loved this part. It was the whole reason he went through the act, really. For this part. Gale always came with a theatrical flair, banging his head back against the bathroom tile, scraping his back against the shower tap hard enough to leave marks, sliding his fingers over Randy's scalp to his nape in an almost bruising caress, and coming till his legs gave out and he collapsed between Randy's knees.

Gale came like a porn star, if a porn star could act. It was fucking gorgeous, all around. And frankly, it looked better in daylight.

Gale grinned afterwards. "Man, if you'd just do this for me at night sometime my life would be perfect."

"Your life is perfect."

"Well, as perfect as it can be without having a twelve inch cock."

"I wouldn't be able to deepthroat you if you had a twelve inch cock."

"Good point."

Date: 2004-04-27 11:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spaggel.livejournal.com
it just kinda hits you, doesn't it?

Date: 2004-04-27 11:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spaggel.livejournal.com
OMG!! I <3 you!! You wrote pr0n for me! :-*

I will have your babies as soon as you have sperm.

Date: 2004-04-27 11:20 pm (UTC)

Date: 2004-04-27 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stellarlee.livejournal.com
alkfjslajas!

Yeah, that about sums it up ;)

Date: 2004-04-27 11:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eleveninches.livejournal.com
Night complete. Can go to bed happy now.

Date: 2004-04-28 09:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
Hee! Glad to be of service.

Date: 2004-04-28 12:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tehshiny.livejournal.com
*coma*

*wakes up*

*reads pr0n*

*squee*

*coma*

Date: 2004-04-28 09:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
Ted? Ted?!?

*pokes*

*pokes more*

Jesus, it's like 1.03 all over again.

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Date: 2004-04-28 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aotearoagal.livejournal.com
Pretty and dirty (but getting oh, so clean in the shower): two of my favourite things.

Date: 2004-04-28 09:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
Hmmm -- it seems that shower!sex is a fairly common kink.

*ponders*

Date: 2004-04-28 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tinyblondeone.livejournal.com
So, yeah. GUH...

Date: 2004-04-28 09:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
I'm going to interpret that as a compliment.

;o)

Date: 2004-04-28 01:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tuatha-sidhe.livejournal.com
Hee, this is great, I love it.

Date: 2004-04-28 09:21 am (UTC)

Date: 2004-04-28 02:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kick-it-harder.livejournal.com
i love this :D!!!
<3

Date: 2004-04-28 09:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
Thank Syd. It's all her fault.

Date: 2004-04-28 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dissident-dream.livejournal.com
Gale came like a porn star, if a porn star could act

heh what a great fic to wake up to :D

Date: 2004-04-28 09:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
Oh, good -- this feedback was great to wake up to!

Date: 2004-04-28 02:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillife.livejournal.com
Very nice. Loved the theatrical orgasm!

Date: 2004-04-28 08:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] estella7.livejournal.com
Work that orgasm, Gale! :D

*dies*

Date: 2004-04-28 09:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
Gah! *drags away body*

Date: 2004-04-28 09:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thanks-thankyou.livejournal.com
Now *that's* what I'm talking about...*lights a joint*

Date: 2004-04-28 09:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
*swipes joint*

*takes a drag*

*hands back*

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Date: 2004-04-28 09:50 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] alymid.livejournal.com
*giggle* very cute ...

Date: 2004-04-28 10:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
:D

*blushes*

Date: 2004-04-28 12:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/bliss_/
Soooooo good!!

Thanks so much, with the new season starting I have been in RPS withdrawal! LOL

Date: 2004-04-28 12:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
Withdrawal? That doesn't sound good. Glad I could help!

;o)

Date: 2004-04-28 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ohyeah36.livejournal.com
Yay that was good =)
See, I commented on my own this time!

Date: 2004-04-28 02:50 pm (UTC)

Date: 2004-04-28 03:20 pm (UTC)

Date: 2004-04-28 03:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
Heh, heh, heh.

Date: 2004-04-28 10:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sita-moonlight.livejournal.com
HOT! That was hot. lol. Wheee... I love shower scenes.

Date: 2004-04-28 11:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
Yay! Glad you liked!

Date: 2004-04-29 11:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] on-the-ground.livejournal.com
This was so good!! You should dedicate your talent to write just G/R RPS for your fans!!

Thanks, it was really fun to read.

Date: 2004-04-29 11:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
Heh. Well, I'm not going t devote my talent *entirely* to G/R. I have vidding and other fandoms to think about.

Glad you enjoyed it.

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Date: 2004-05-02 05:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] irisanderson.livejournal.com
I got this link for a RPS community, truth be told: this is the first piece of RPS I have ever read. Thank you for a good first time.

Now I am going to have another addiction.:P Do you have more?

Date: 2004-05-02 10:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
Oooooh! A newbie! I do, in fact, have more. All of my QaF RPS can be found: here (http://www.livejournal.com/tools/memories.bml?user=lierdumoa&keyword=Fic+-+QaF&filter=all).

If after reading that you're interested in reading more, I can recommend a few authors.

:D

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Date: 2004-07-06 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] justbelimber.livejournal.com
Bwah! The ending was fabulous. I love the whole thing though. It was a nice look into their life.

Good job.

Date: 2004-07-21 01:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lierdumoa.livejournal.com
Oi! How did I forget to reply to this comment?!

Thanks for the feedback!

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